Hi Karl, I really enjoyed reading your best day ever poem. It was great you used the 5 senses to help you construct your poem. One thing you need to fix is on the first line you can see one word properly because the suit cases are covering it a little bit. Keep up te great work Karl.
Hi Karl, I really enjoyed reading your best day ever poem. It was great you used the 5 senses to help you construct your poem. One thing you need to fix is on the first line you can see one word properly because the suit cases are covering it a little bit. Keep up te great work Karl.
Hi Karl, I really enjoyed reading your best day ever poem. It was great you used the 5 senses to help you construct your poem. One thing you need to fix is on the first line you can see one word properly because the suit cases are covering it a little bit. Keep up te great work Karl.
ReplyDeleteHi Karl, I really enjoyed reading your best day ever poem. It was great you used the 5 senses to help you construct your poem. One thing you need to fix is on the first line you can see one word properly because the suit cases are covering it a little bit. Keep up te great work Karl.
ReplyDeletehi karl
ReplyDeleteI like your discriptive words
next time you can focouse on putting similies and other things on