This is a remake of My sister and I
Plan
Audience: blogers
To: describe
Memorie 1 Cooking
Memorie 2 Watching tv
Memorie 3 Getting baxta
Memorie 4 chips on friday
20/3/18 My Nana And I
We were quiet people
my nana and I.
Chips circle like
Rodeo like
Round the table
when good times were up.
We were playful people
my nana and I.
Dogs barks
puppy-like
in the dog park
when nanas leash was down.
We were amagentive people
my nana and I.
We laughed
chicken-like
to the tv
when nana found fun.
We were cooking people
my nana and I.
We cooked
Gordon ramsay -like
In the kitchen
when we felt like it .
We were quiet people
we were playful people
we were amangetive people
we were cooking people
my nana and I
when nana
was alive.
Like it says this is a remake of a pice of writing My sister and I. so we used it as a model and had to make up 4 memorys, like in the oranl copy.
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